McDonalds is harmfu to the people of NZ. I agree

Introduction
McDonald's is harmful to the people in NZ?

Who is persuading?
Olivia
What is the argument?
is McDonald's harmful? I agree

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main point
*  McDonald's is harmful to the people in NZ because You can find rat bones, cockroaches and other things in your food. Finding bugs and other things in your food can poison you and therefore McDonald's is harm full. Did you know that somebody found a rat's foot in their bugar! Eww! Do you really want to be eating bugs and rodent bones?



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main point
* Another reason McDonald's is harmful to people in Nz is, that People tend to litter their McDonald's cups and packets. Littering caused the rivers to go toxic and all the animals in the river die. Littering also makes our town look dirty and people won't want to live here anymore. If you look around, may just be able to spot some in the rivers and gutters.




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main point
* The last reason is that, kids easily get addicted to it and want it all the time. Which means they will gain fat and some of the might turn out to be obese and may develop diabetes. It's also mens that adults are wasting their money on it when they could be going to a healthier place.



Conclusion/summary
Over all McDonald's is harmful to NZers because, you can find rat bones, cockroaches and other gross things in your food, people also tend to litter their McDonalds cups and packets and kids get easily addicted to it.