Introduction
McDonald's is harmful to the people in NZ?
Who is persuading?
Olivia
What is the argument?
is McDonald's harmful? I agree
paragraph 1
main point
* McDonald's is harmful to the people in NZ because You can find rat bones, cockroaches and other things in your food. Finding bugs and other things in your food can poison you and therefore McDonald's is harm full. Did you know that somebody found a rat's foot in their bugar! Eww! Do you really want to be eating bugs and rodent bones?
paragraph 2
main point
* Another reason McDonald's is harmful to people in Nz is, that People tend to litter their McDonald's cups and packets. Littering caused the rivers to go toxic and all the animals in the river die. Littering also makes our town look dirty and people won't want to live here anymore. If you look around, may just be able to spot some in the rivers and gutters.
paragraph 3
main point
* The last reason is that, kids easily get addicted to it and want it all the time. Which means they will gain fat and some of the might turn out to be obese and may develop diabetes. It's also mens that adults are wasting their money on it when they could be going to a healthier place.
Conclusion/summary
Over all McDonald's is harmful to NZers because, you can find rat bones, cockroaches and other gross things in your food, people also tend to litter their McDonalds cups and packets and kids get easily addicted to it.
Friday 20 May 2016
Friday 13 May 2016
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Friday 6 May 2016
My Holiday recount
“GOAL! 29 BEAT THAT” Benji yelled. I was Feeling confident that we would win. “You better beat that Matthew or we will lose” Emily groaned and gave him a look that said “If you lose I will kill you.”
“30!! HA.”Matthew yelled! Emily and Matthew were overwhelmed at their accomplishment. The next round is double points!
The final round was hurdles. Emily and I are the best at hurdles and who ever wins, puts their Team first or tied! My heart was racing and I was so nervous. The whistle went and Emily and I were neck in neck. Emily tripped over the second hurdle, putting me ahead.
After the race was done, The results was clear. But who won? was it me or Emily? I Was out of breath and anxious because it was taking so long. “Ok guys and girls, the winner is….. BENJI AND LIV!!” someone Called out. Benji and I were so happy.
A big frown spread across Emily's face. Her hands started to screw up into paper balls and then a tear ran down her cheek. As she wiped it away she started yelling at us, “YOU CHEATED. THAT'S NOT FAIR. WE SHOULD HAVE TO DO THE HURDLES AGAIN.”
“30!! HA.”Matthew yelled! Emily and Matthew were overwhelmed at their accomplishment. The next round is double points!
The final round was hurdles. Emily and I are the best at hurdles and who ever wins, puts their Team first or tied! My heart was racing and I was so nervous. The whistle went and Emily and I were neck in neck. Emily tripped over the second hurdle, putting me ahead.
After the race was done, The results was clear. But who won? was it me or Emily? I Was out of breath and anxious because it was taking so long. “Ok guys and girls, the winner is….. BENJI AND LIV!!” someone Called out. Benji and I were so happy.
A big frown spread across Emily's face. Her hands started to screw up into paper balls and then a tear ran down her cheek. As she wiped it away she started yelling at us, “YOU CHEATED. THAT'S NOT FAIR. WE SHOULD HAVE TO DO THE HURDLES AGAIN.”
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