Monday 4 September 2017

Quick writes

Quick writes this year so far

Writting sample

He lay there. Listening for the soft sound of footsteps walking up the stairs. Listening for the creek of the door. He watched for feet to enter the room. Scared and frightened, he lay there. His mind was racing. Will they enter the room? He felt his heart running 1000 mph. He shook in fear from head to toe. It was getting stuffy and hot under the bed. The silence was broken by the sound of footsteps, Slowly climbing up the stairs. His heart was now running at 10000 mph. He trembled with fear. The footsteps got louder….. And louder. Then stopped. The door creaked open and light enter the room. His breathing slowed down. The world slowed down. Someone had pushed the big red button and slowed the world down. His hands got sweaty.he felt hot. Walking across the room was a man's feet. Will he find me? Will he see me? They walked over to the window and opened the curtain.  BOO! His dad popped under the bed and pulled him out. That was an intense round of hide n seek.