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Persuasive Writing - Why we should wear mufti

Why we should wear mufti

The first reason why we should wear mufti is that if we don't have a school jacket jumper, we freeze. We aren't allowed to wear a mufti jumper in the winter. Because we can't, we get sick. If we do wear a mufti one we get a uniform pass and after it expires we are expected to have a school one. Because the yr 8 uniform is no longer sold, we can't go and buy a new one; And we can't wear the new one with the old uniform. Also, there is no point in buying the new uniform because we are only here for 6 more months.

The second reason why we should wear mufti is that we have to wear completely black shoes. It's hard to find completely black shoes in the shop because they either have white souls you can see, they don't have your size and they are extremely uncomfortable. If we don't have the correct shoes, we are expected to go and buy new ones. Not everyone has the time to go and get new shoes. And not everyone can afford it.

The third reason why we should wear mufti is that our uniform is that it's expensive. Our uniform is very expensive and some people don't have the money to buy it. Some people only got their uniform by getting it off an ex-student. If we wore mufti we wouldn't have to buy a uniform. We wouldn't have to buy mufti either (well every once in awhile we would have to) because there is a thing called a washing machine that cleans our clothes so we can wear them again.

In conclusion, we should wear mufti because we freeze because we don't have a jacket and can't wear a random one if we don't have black shoes expected to go out and buy completely black shoes if we don't have them and it's expensive

Persuasive Writing - why we Shouldnt have Homework

Why we shouldn't have Homework

The First reason why we shouldn't have homework is that some people have no time to do it. Some people have activities on after school and have no time afterwards. I have hockey on Tuesdays from 4 til 7. Sometimes my games are 4-5 but then we go get dinner, eat, have a shower. By the time I do that it's 8:30 and I go to sleep. Loads of people have sports after school like hockey, gymnastics, netball, soccer, rugby, dance and so on. Even if the game or activity finishes early, we are too tired to sit down and do maths and we also have to have a shower and eat.

Secondly, we need to sleep and relax. Teachers pile up the homework and there's too much. We spend our weekends catching up on the piles of homework because we couldn't do it on weekdays because of after school activities. .We have to do it all before a certain date. Sometimes we are expected to do it in a week. Because different teachers give you different homework we have no time to sleep or relax.  We end up having very little time to chill out with our friends. Or we do our homework with our friends because they have a whole pile they couldn't finish during the week either.

lastly, it can cause stress and stress can lead to depression. Some people think they have to cram everything in because they can't do it all they panic and get stressed. We also lose sleep and get stressed about the tiniest things. Because we aren't sleeping and we are stressed, we get grouchy. We grump at our parents and they tell us off for staying up too late.

In conclusion, we shouldn't have homework because we have no time to do it, we need to sleep and relax. Because we have sports after school, we have no time for sleep and then we get stressed and grumpy.